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Haiku
is a form of poetic expression originating
from Japan. A traditional Haiku is a poem of
three lines with the first line containing
words that total exactly 5 syllables, the second
line contains words that total to exactly 7
syllables and the final third line with a total
of 5 syllables as is the first line. In other
words, the traditional Haiku has a total of
3 lines and 17 syllables. in a 5-7-5 pattern.
Reading translations of traditional Japanese
Haiku may result in a sacrifice of the pattern
for artistry in word meaning. Two samples (excepts
from Autumn) of traditional Japanese
Haiku by the famous Haiku poet Basho
(translated by Jane Reichhold) are the following:
the
moon so pure
a wandering monk carries it
across the sand
occasional
clouds
one gets a rest
from moon-viewing
Some
modern Haiku, not following the pattern, are
from poet Gene
Doty:
sea
breeze
carrying the fumes
of jet-ski exhaust
county
jail
morning glories climb through
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Once
Haiku inspires you, you never know when a poem
will rise up in your mind. I like the challenge
of staying with the traditional 5-7-5 pattern.
Often that means rewriting the poem after the
initial inspiration or imagery. The rewrites
clarify imagery within the boundaries of the
line and syllabic pattern.
While driving home one beautiful summer day,
the surrounding golden hillsides inspired this
Haiku. There were many rewrites until the imagery
was framed by the traditional pattern.
wispy
cloud fingers (5)
stretching, stroking wheaten slopes (7)
languid in blue skies (5)
Other
times a Haiku bursts out unannounced and complete;
such as the following poem which arose while
my students were taking timings (skill testing)
in Keyboarding class. We had electric typewriters
so there was always a lot of synchronized clatter
during timings. I immediately wrote it on the
board for the students and they loved it.
keyboard
class timing (5)
popcorn popping until "Stop" (7)
one tardy kernel (5)
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You
can learn a lot more about Haiku poetry and
modern variations of the traditional form on
the Internet as there are many great personal
web sites dedicated to Haiku. A good place
to begin, with good links to other Haiku sites,
is
Haiku
for People- http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/
At
the "AHa!
Poetry!" other poetic forms such as
Cinquains, Ghazal, Renga, Sijo and Tanka are
described as well. http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm.
Hmm.
I feel a Haiku arising now.
do
you Haiku? do! (5)
wings outspread on bright white clouds(7)
inkmarks on paper (5)
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